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    The kid.

    He has a tit on his shirt.

    Anyways, nothing to criticize; Nicely done, as always.

    Haha

    Nice username :P Anyways, on to the review.

    I have to say, this is fantastic for a first frame by frame animation. It's better than my first, that's for sure. You could improve on this by using more realistic details in movement, textures, and colors. For example, instead of flipping the stick figure around using the re-size tool, you could make 8 consecutive angles of view and instead of just solid colors, you could add scratches and scuff marks to the ramp and patches of dark grass in the ground. Also, a more realistic color for the sky. I doubt there's ever been a light teal skyline.

    A wacom bamboo

    ...and a stead hand would do you great if you ever decide do frame by frame in flash.

    Your animation was indeed very smooth but I was a little disoriented by the choppiness of the camera movement. Quick music could also be added and with a little action script, you could easily make a music jukebox if you ever decide to make your animations longer. For that, I recommend this easy tutorial:

    http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /399780

    Great job overall, you should be proud of yourself :)

    5/5

    fishhook responds:

    HEY THANKS!

    yeah i could find any better music! if anyone has any or knows any gimme a link!

    and thanks for the tutorial!

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    -You need..

    to increase the frame rate to 30 frames per second so the movement looks much more smooth.

    -Fiddle around with the actionscript to better the chance of not jumping out of the screen.

    -I found that I could jump while in the air, wtf?

    -And finally you need better buttons because I had a hard time clicking the first "play" button, and chances are, the rest of your audience will too.

    Please revise your flash so that it doesn't suck so much hairy cock when you submit the full version.

    P.S- Don't reply with anything saying it was only a demo, that's no excuse for laziness and over ambition.

    Slow...

    You have a great style and good graphics to go along with your idea but you need to make it a little faster for it to work out if it makes it past testing. Some parts just didn't load at all... but maybe I'm too impatient. Anyways great job, and keep it up.

    This was very appealing to the eye and it has great potential.

    4/5

    As with many...

    ...of your games, you need to disable the forward button when you right click. Although these graphics aren't much better, they're still easy to the eye.

    Great job on this one but please watch this for better better buttons and stuff.

    Better buttons- http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /403236
    Better menu's and borders- http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /403238

    I hope this helps, 5/5

    Phil responds:

    Thanks
    I have now disabled the forward button

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    IFUN

    You have a sexy voice :o

    InsertFunnyUserName responds:

    Thanks :D

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    Reminds me...

    ...Of Brent Spiner.

    Good work.

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