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Haha

Nice username :P Anyways, on to the review.

I have to say, this is fantastic for a first frame by frame animation. It's better than my first, that's for sure. You could improve on this by using more realistic details in movement, textures, and colors. For example, instead of flipping the stick figure around using the re-size tool, you could make 8 consecutive angles of view and instead of just solid colors, you could add scratches and scuff marks to the ramp and patches of dark grass in the ground. Also, a more realistic color for the sky. I doubt there's ever been a light teal skyline.

A wacom bamboo

...and a stead hand would do you great if you ever decide do frame by frame in flash.

Your animation was indeed very smooth but I was a little disoriented by the choppiness of the camera movement. Quick music could also be added and with a little action script, you could easily make a music jukebox if you ever decide to make your animations longer. For that, I recommend this easy tutorial:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /399780

Great job overall, you should be proud of yourself :)

5/5

fishhook responds:

HEY THANKS!

yeah i could find any better music! if anyone has any or knows any gimme a link!

and thanks for the tutorial!

Utterly

Hilarious. To me this was just going to be another boring point, click, and hover information board with a bland design when I seen this in the portal but I was sadly, sadly mistaken. Your narration mixed in with your sense of humor made this the one of the greats.

I could see this with an underdog award in a few days. 5/5

/cock sucking

Elios responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my movie. Though i'm not expecting any kind of reward for this, it would be awesome to get some recognition.

Reply to your reply

"Not hated. Just disputed.

You wouldn't believe how many crazy fans I have. Try reading the 80 plus pages of reviews here.

I have enough praise to know that a sequal is necessary."

Click on the reviews button, set the view to "rating" and go to page 45.

As for your, for lack of a better word, "flash":

- I didn't really see any effort put into it except for the small bit of frame by frame blob to cover the logo on your sweatshirt. Nice try though.

-The lack of a screen with the words"over" or "replay" pissed me off a little as I had to watch your "flash" for a second time without realizing it.

- And there are many tutorials to put in a pre-loader with the video footage you have. But I'll keep it it simple, right here.

---First, open Adobe Flash.
---Open a the file with the NG pre-loader and copy the frames in the timeline like the instructions say.
---Paste them into the timeline of your other "new" window.
---Import the video footage
---Test
---Go to the settings for your flash on newgrounds and upload the new version.
---Done

This looks

so fucking sweet! Finish it nao so I can 5 it!

Good use with blur and the screen shaking with the explosions.

But yet it's unfinished so in gets a 6/10, 4/5

Xiaolee92 responds:

Thx for the comments!!
I hope u enjoy urself!!The full version is comming soon!!

lol sweet

Add a tiny loop of music to go in sync with it.

Good work

4/5

HA good work

That was a cool and funny short, I like you style of animating.

Good work

5/5

Vincenator responds:

Really? Hooray! Good reviews make me type happy emoticons! :D ^_^ :)

SWALLOW

SWALLOW! Ha that was so funny, your sense of humor is great too ;D

Epic

The best .swf judgment day movie ever. It felt alot like the terminator genre with the music and story line and for some reason those voices certainly go with A and P-bot.

Nice going, favorited

5/5

M4KBOT responds:

Yeah, the music was important and I have the Audio Portal to thank for that. Thank you very much for the review!

Haha

Good stuff! I guess that photoshop Mr.Bean thread came in handy :P

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