Score: 6

"Over all"

submission: White Demons 3

date: August 10, 2008

The animation was extremely choppy so I suggest you try to make movement between each frame shorter. I also found it annoying that there was no movement to denote who was speaking or if it was a narrator who was speaking, and not to mention the volume at which you were speaking. Like you were trying to be quiet. Well, that failed because I found myself turning the volume up and down between words, as each was at a different volume.

I suggest you try to fiddle around with your audio files in audacity or another audio editing program to raise the volume and lower it where you see fit.

I hope you take these suggestions into consideration and improve your flashes.

On another note, I'm seeing a pattern where you're dismissing people's reviews because they don't have any animations to of their own. I find this irritating.

Take The Dark Knight for example. The people asked to critic that movie did not have their reviews dismissed because they did not have any acting or directing talent of their own, but instead they were listened to because those people had valid opinions about the movie. I suggest you take a hint from the pros, and shut your mouth.

Score: 8

"A wacom bamboo"

submission: Super-Awesome-Fancy-Man!

date: January 29, 2008

...and a stead hand would do you great if you ever decide do frame by frame in flash.

Your animation was indeed very smooth but I was a little disoriented by the choppiness of the camera movement. Quick music could also be added and with a little action script, you could easily make a music jukebox if you ever decide to make your animations longer. For that, I recommend this easy tutorial:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /399780

Great job overall, you should be proud of yourself :)

5/5

Score: 10

"Utterly"

submission: Welcome to Newgrounds!

date: January 27, 2008

Hilarious. To me this was just going to be another boring point, click, and hover information board with a bland design when I seen this in the portal but I was sadly, sadly mistaken. Your narration mixed in with your sense of humor made this the one of the greats.

I could see this with an underdog award in a few days. 5/5

/cock sucking

Score: 6

"This looks"

submission: Killer Instinct 1(undone)

date: December 27, 2007

so fucking sweet! Finish it nao so I can 5 it!

Good use with blur and the screen shaking with the explosions.

But yet it's unfinished so in gets a 6/10, 4/5

Score: 9

"As with many..."

submission: ZombiePhil's Quiz 12 (CE)

date: December 15, 2007

...of your games, you need to disable the forward button when you right click. Although these graphics aren't much better, they're still easy to the eye.

Great job on this one but please watch this for better better buttons and stuff.

Better buttons- http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /403236
Better menu's and borders- http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /403238

I hope this helps, 5/5

Score: 9

"HA good work"

submission: Assassins Bleed

date: December 11, 2007

That was a cool and funny short, I like you style of animating.

Good work

5/5

Score: 10

"OOO"

submission: Newgrounds Information

date: December 9, 2007

This is neat, good workd!

Score: 10

"Epic"

submission: After Judgement

date: December 3, 2007

The best .swf judgment day movie ever. It felt alot like the terminator genre with the music and story line and for some reason those voices certainly go with A and P-bot.

Nice going, favorited

5/5

Score: 10

"I liked.."

submission: Slick: Showdown

date: November 24, 2007

this alot, especially the opening beat where everything was in total sync

No room for improvement :]