Score: 10

"The kid."

submission: Rebecca

date: February 22, 2009

He has a tit on his shirt.

Anyways, nothing to criticize; Nicely done, as always.

Score: 6

"Haha"

submission: Sk8r Dude

date: September 26, 2008

Nice username :P Anyways, on to the review.

I have to say, this is fantastic for a first frame by frame animation. It's better than my first, that's for sure. You could improve on this by using more realistic details in movement, textures, and colors. For example, instead of flipping the stick figure around using the re-size tool, you could make 8 consecutive angles of view and instead of just solid colors, you could add scratches and scuff marks to the ramp and patches of dark grass in the ground. Also, a more realistic color for the sky. I doubt there's ever been a light teal skyline.

Score: 6

"Over all"

submission: White Demons 3

date: August 10, 2008

The animation was extremely choppy so I suggest you try to make movement between each frame shorter. I also found it annoying that there was no movement to denote who was speaking or if it was a narrator who was speaking, and not to mention the volume at which you were speaking. Like you were trying to be quiet. Well, that failed because I found myself turning the volume up and down between words, as each was at a different volume.

I suggest you try to fiddle around with your audio files in audacity or another audio editing program to raise the volume and lower it where you see fit.

I hope you take these suggestions into consideration and improve your flashes.

On another note, I'm seeing a pattern where you're dismissing people's reviews because they don't have any animations to of their own. I find this irritating.

Take The Dark Knight for example. The people asked to critic that movie did not have their reviews dismissed because they did not have any acting or directing talent of their own, but instead they were listened to because those people had valid opinions about the movie. I suggest you take a hint from the pros, and shut your mouth.

Score: 4

"-You need.."

submission: A.D.V.E.N.T.U.R.E. demo

date: February 2, 2008

to increase the frame rate to 30 frames per second so the movement looks much more smooth.

-Fiddle around with the actionscript to better the chance of not jumping out of the screen.

-I found that I could jump while in the air, wtf?

-And finally you need better buttons because I had a hard time clicking the first "play" button, and chances are, the rest of your audience will too.

Please revise your flash so that it doesn't suck so much hairy cock when you submit the full version.

P.S- Don't reply with anything saying it was only a demo, that's no excuse for laziness and over ambition.

Score: 8

"Slow..."

submission: Mini web site

date: January 29, 2008

You have a great style and good graphics to go along with your idea but you need to make it a little faster for it to work out if it makes it past testing. Some parts just didn't load at all... but maybe I'm too impatient. Anyways great job, and keep it up.

This was very appealing to the eye and it has great potential.

4/5

Score: 8

"A wacom bamboo"

submission: Super-Awesome-Fancy-Man!

date: January 29, 2008

...and a stead hand would do you great if you ever decide do frame by frame in flash.

Your animation was indeed very smooth but I was a little disoriented by the choppiness of the camera movement. Quick music could also be added and with a little action script, you could easily make a music jukebox if you ever decide to make your animations longer. For that, I recommend this easy tutorial:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /399780

Great job overall, you should be proud of yourself :)

5/5

Score: 10

"Utterly"

submission: Welcome to Newgrounds!

date: January 27, 2008

Hilarious. To me this was just going to be another boring point, click, and hover information board with a bland design when I seen this in the portal but I was sadly, sadly mistaken. Your narration mixed in with your sense of humor made this the one of the greats.

I could see this with an underdog award in a few days. 5/5

/cock sucking

Score: 4

"Reply to your reply"

submission: Freezepop's JEM!

date: January 25, 2008

"Not hated. Just disputed.

You wouldn't believe how many crazy fans I have. Try reading the 80 plus pages of reviews here.

I have enough praise to know that a sequal is necessary."

Click on the reviews button, set the view to "rating" and go to page 45.

As for your, for lack of a better word, "flash":

- I didn't really see any effort put into it except for the small bit of frame by frame blob to cover the logo on your sweatshirt. Nice try though.

-The lack of a screen with the words"over" or "replay" pissed me off a little as I had to watch your "flash" for a second time without realizing it.

- And there are many tutorials to put in a pre-loader with the video footage you have. But I'll keep it it simple, right here.

---First, open Adobe Flash.
---Open a the file with the NG pre-loader and copy the frames in the timeline like the instructions say.
---Paste them into the timeline of your other "new" window.
---Import the video footage
---Test
---Go to the settings for your flash on newgrounds and upload the new version.
---Done

Score: 6

"This looks"

submission: Killer Instinct 1(undone)

date: December 27, 2007

so fucking sweet! Finish it nao so I can 5 it!

Good use with blur and the screen shaking with the explosions.

But yet it's unfinished so in gets a 6/10, 4/5

Score: 8

"lol sweet"

submission: 3D Lamp

date: December 27, 2007

Add a tiny loop of music to go in sync with it.

Good work

4/5